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Drew a NBC AU
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

So before I start I want to say you are an amazing artist and this is very nice but I do have some critiques I'd like to share.

Alright so your anatomy is pretty accurate to say the least and I applaud you for drawing full body so often, but your proportions are off in some areas that could easily be fixed with slight alteration or adjustment, you just need to practice them more I figure. The torso and the limbs don't exactly dovetail in the drawing. The legs are too large and thick for the torso, seeing as the character, Malachy, is drawn in a lean body mass making the viewer believe that he would be more slender or lanky legs, and the arms go with this statement, too. The calves and forearms could be less angled perhaps and slightly bend in more to grasp the human anatomy better. Malachy's hand in the top left could use some alteration to better fit the structure of a human hand (i.e. img11.deviantart.net/04da/i/20…) and the feet could be slimmed in the slightest, morphing into a more natrual shape you could say as in the drawing where they are slightly more square then natrually in the real world. The expressions I adore completely but they could be somewhat more manifold, seeing as they're very similar but it does go together quite well, but seeing as they have considerably different personalities it would make it more "human" (even though they're demons) I suppose.

The muscle structure of both characters could've been carried out in a more curved way to show the bulges of the mass seeing as it looks more flat to a degree then in real life where it's more swollen, but then again it may just be me :^)

Needless to say, you are an amazing artist and you'll only get better from this point forward. I hope you continue to draw and refine your already amazing skills and I look forward to seeing your future streams and drawings :^)