Malion On Ice

A few things


The harsh black lines of the drawing contrast to a sharp degree with the feel that the piece is trying to portray, so I would recommend changing the lineart color in a slight way to fit in more with the mood to look more natural per say.

The shoulders, they don't work like that. There would be no line in the center yet a line connecting(?) the ends of the muscle (e.g. i1240.photobucket.com/albums/g… )

The legs, the part behind the knee, the line would go to opposite direction as it caves into the leg, not out of the leg.

I'd work on dynamic poses slightly more, now it is a pretty dynamic pose yet it doesn't look the most comfy, the way you portray it makes it seem stiff almost slightly mocking(?)

Backgrounds. Add more detail, draw it by hand it makes it look nicer in all honesty even with shaky lines no one gives a shit boo, do it we love u you fucking asshole, anyway, yeah that

and last but not least
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anyway


thats it


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